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#1 Crispee-FL

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Posted 01 July 2018 - 05:50 PM

Thought I would share and see what you all think.

 

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#2 moruga welder

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Posted 01 July 2018 - 06:17 PM

DIGGING IT !     :onfire:



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Posted 01 July 2018 - 06:29 PM

Very nice and very clean. Cheers!



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Posted 01 July 2018 - 09:59 PM

Everything looks good. The lettering could be bolder IMO. Your name should stand out just as much as the artwork if not more. Good job nonetheless.

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Posted 01 July 2018 - 10:00 PM

You have a website?

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Posted 01 July 2018 - 10:05 PM

I feel like on a bottle a lot of this will get lost. Bigger, bolder! And the star looks so random. What does the red star mean? Why is it there?



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Posted 01 July 2018 - 10:10 PM

Looks great buddy. I would recommend putting the "rubs" at the bottom of the label in the middle though. It would make it more symmetrical. Especially since the phoenix is a symmetrical figure and it's a round label.

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Posted 01 July 2018 - 10:41 PM

 And the star looks so random. What does the red star mean? Why is it there?

 

Not random, he has a the same star in his profile pic. I am now curious to know the meaning behind the star. Fill us in Crispy. 


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Posted 01 July 2018 - 11:51 PM

fantastic!


Edited by Voodoo 6, 02 July 2018 - 12:32 AM.


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Posted 02 July 2018 - 06:34 AM

You have a website?

We are working on finalizing the website before publishing it, as well as finishing up some of the legalities.
  

I feel like on a bottle a lot of this will get lost. Bigger, bolder! And the star looks so random. What does the red star mean? Why is it there?

  
I would have to agree that it can get lost on a bottle label after seeing a mock up applied to a 5oz woozy bottle. The star does have significance.

Not random, he has a the same star in his profile pic. I am now curious to know the meaning behind the star. Fill us in Crispy.

Both the star and the Phoenix are not random, kinda a long story I will explain after work today.

Edited by Crispee-FL, 02 July 2018 - 06:37 AM.


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Posted 02 July 2018 - 08:09 AM

+1 on moving rubs to the center

 

Bolder text would be good too. 

 

That Phoenix is pretty bad ass



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Posted 02 July 2018 - 10:03 AM

I'm picturing it like this...
 
The "ring" (between the 2 lines) is solid black, the letters are white, it only says "Crispee's Pepper Co." The other stuff is products you sell, that doesn't really go in a logo and creates clutter. I would also have the wings spread beyond the circle. This makes the bird discernible, the text pop, and keeps it clean.
 
The red star at the top of a circle to me looks like Heineken.
 
Of course these are just comments, if you use it as is, still looks good and hopefully the sauce is. :)

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Posted 02 July 2018 - 10:13 AM

Let me show you what I man real quick and how it is legible small. Something like...

 

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Posted 02 July 2018 - 10:19 AM

Obviously I am no designer just trying to show how the bird and text can pop better.

 

The bird is pretty killer btw! :)



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Posted 02 July 2018 - 10:19 AM

Nice !!



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Posted 02 July 2018 - 11:15 AM

oops i meant like that... fixed the upside down text... ;)

 

Anywho best of luck!



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Posted 02 July 2018 - 12:44 PM

Looks great Crispee. I also dig our Boss man's suggestion of black outer ring with white lettering. It brings more pop to the letters.



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Posted 02 July 2018 - 07:16 PM

Ill work on it a little further with my graphics person at the office. Its just a short week since I am closing the office Wednesday through Sunday for the summer holidays and trying to fit a whole week into 2 days is never fun.
Ill get into to the history and symbology soon, just been a long day.

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Posted 03 July 2018 - 01:04 AM

Something like this?

 

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Posted 03 July 2018 - 09:25 AM

My personal preference is Sauces - Rubs - Spices on the website, and business card, in text below logo, not in it... and if on the bottle, maybe on the back or bottom of logo. It's a cluttered look, like Kraft cheese, they are not telling you they also sell mayonnaise on the cheese packet in the logo. Keep it clean and crisp(ee). Just my 2¢.






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