artwork Any tips on my logo?

[The Hott Dude]

I am willing to have tips to make any changes before the production, which is small and for friends and families but still I wish to look professional like others here. 

 

[salsalady]

The silhouette looks like it could be Velma from Scooby doodoo..

Fify~

 

[CDNmatt]

The whole Anal seepage thing would probably make me pass something like this by if it were on a shelf in the store......I showed my wife the label and she says ``Is this one of those 2 girls one cup type sauces``
 
I have to give this one a 2 thumbs down for me .
 
As well I think it would give me nightmares for life to see a grown woman actually modeling this type of thing...TMI on your moms

 

[luvmesump3pp3rz]

Thank you salsalady. The men in the family they think it is not so good, the womens, they love it. My mother she said I should have asked her to model it because she blows up the bathroom like nobody I told her next time, on the sequel sauce, she can model it and I will call it Mother Lode.

sequel sauce? say it aint so. 

 

[CDNmatt]

The silhouette looks like it could be Velma from Scooby doo..

LOL aye it does
 
``Mystery St-inc`` may be a better name

 

[salsalady]

Isn't anything coming out the back end already a sequel?

 

[MikeUSMC]

The silhouette looks like it could be Velma from Scooby doo..

 

[salsalady]

LOL aye it does
 
``Mystery St-inc`` may be a better name

Mystery sphincter.... Even Scooby wouldn't track that.

 

[WarrantMan]

This kinda feels like there might be a hidden camera somewhere....ala "punked!" 
 
If for real, you got me dude. Definitely a bold statement for sure.

 

[CDNmatt]

Oh this poor poor thread

 

[WarrantMan]

Oh this poor poor thread

 
Oh man, that's why I love this place! It has it all - knowledge, friendships, music, humor and great entertainment! I couldn't design a better place if I tried.... 

 

[The Hot Pepper]

Oh this poor pooP thread

 

 

[CDNmatt]

 

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+1 point THP

 

[WarrantMan]

one more log on the fire....
 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=blfGeUvLDfo

 

[CDNmatt]

one more log on the fire....

 

Extreme flatulence is perfectly fine if its from a good looking woman a wise man once said...the modern woman knows how to drop a bomb with class.

 

[MikeUSMC]

Extreme flatulence is perfectly fine if its from a good looking woman a wise man once said...the modern woman knows how to drop a bomb with class.

 

[Guatemalan Insanity Pepper]

 

[Thegreenchilemonster]

 

[Scovie]

Dood. I give it 3 poops on the Chile porn scale.

 

[The Hott Dude]

This logo has been productioned. Thank you!

 

[MarkLIVE]

Congrats on printing. I wanted to give my two cents though, so If you ever look for a new label, consider this...

There is nothing wrong with your label when it comes to this business. A label is what you want it to be. Its more about info and attraction.

The only thing I can see is, your label wont stand out from the majority of other labels, making your bottle almost blend in to well.

Try changing the black background to white, and altering the color of the fonts to blend with the white bg into the yellow. That way:

a: you save $ on ink by not printing black. (if that matters)
b: your label stands out more with the yellow on white.

Best of luck.