artwork label / logo feedback
- Thread starter Greg88
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I hope you don't mind harsh feedback, but it looks like you searched google images for "chili pepper" and slapped it on a label.
Also "Premium" hot sauce, what is that? Like "Fancy" ketchup? I would ditch that word. It's corporate mumbo jumbo.
Honestly, it looks like you need to hire someone. Unless this is for X-mas gifts, than I would say, it is fine!
Also "Premium" hot sauce, what is that? Like "Fancy" ketchup? I would ditch that word. It's corporate mumbo jumbo.
Honestly, it looks like you need to hire someone. Unless this is for X-mas gifts, than I would say, it is fine!
The Little Bohemian's
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The Little Bohemians'
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The Little Bohemians
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The Little Bohemian
I was wondering which of these is the intent. Is it a group of bohemians and this is their sauce? It is one person nicknamed The Little Bohemian's sauce?
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The Little Bohemians'
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The Little Bohemians
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The Little Bohemian
I was wondering which of these is the intent. Is it a group of bohemians and this is their sauce? It is one person nicknamed The Little Bohemian's sauce?
Pro-Tip
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Check this guy out:
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You can search on fiverr for someone to do a label for as little as $30.
Check this guy out:
https://www.fiverr.com/fares_xps/design-a-creative-unique-hot-sauce-label?context_referrer=search_gigs&source=main_banner&ref_ctx_id=49c6a34c-3308-4938-bbe2-a22f982efe4b&pckg_id=1&pos=1&context_type=auto&funnel=db05c511-ba6a-469a-b81c-7c02a3b235b6&seller_online=true
I sent him a link to fiverr which is a website of cheap designers. Starting price is $30 for design. Nothing to do with printing.
salsalady
Business Member
Interesting...
What is the intention for the label? If it is eventually for a legal sauce, at the first glance, it looks like all the information is there.
Nothing really stands out about the label. Its kinda plain. If it is for gifts, Id loose the NIP, add a romance panel (back story, sauce description, etc...)
Im also interested in what the bohemian(s) is. I also agree with THP to eliminate "premium". I used to make premium salsa. To me its like "gourmet". Overused, underperformed...
Keep us informed!
to THP and Have Fun!
Salsalady
What is the intention for the label? If it is eventually for a legal sauce, at the first glance, it looks like all the information is there.
Nothing really stands out about the label. Its kinda plain. If it is for gifts, Id loose the NIP, add a romance panel (back story, sauce description, etc...)
Im also interested in what the bohemian(s) is. I also agree with THP to eliminate "premium". I used to make premium salsa. To me its like "gourmet". Overused, underperformed...
Keep us informed!
to THP and Have Fun!Salsalady
The Hot Pepper said:
You're absolutely correct!!_
Greg88 said:
Missed that!
Salsa Lady's suggestions seem spot on to me.
Also, why not use a graphic that creates a Bohemian theme? Something evocative of Romani, Beats, natural living, starving artists, body odor
It would also potentially be nicer if you used an illustration instead of clip art, and put some more thought into the fonts. Again, you may choose a font that goes along with a Bohemian theme.
Also, why not use a graphic that creates a Bohemian theme? Something evocative of Romani, Beats, natural living, starving artists, body odor
It would also potentially be nicer if you used an illustration instead of clip art, and put some more thought into the fonts. Again, you may choose a font that goes along with a Bohemian theme.
I already have your first tropical flavor.
Bohemian
Bahamian
Bohemian
Bahamian
Harry_Dangler
Extreme Member
Boho Bhut, Spiritual Awakening (Scorpion), Rara Avis (Reaper), Vagabond (Thai)
Often overlooked, make sure you own that font unless it is free when it comes to commercial use. Everything else has already been said.
JoynersHotPeppers said:
Interesting JHP, I didn't know about this.> The Law on Fonts and Typefaces in Design and Marketing
Siv
Extreme Member
Definitely get a professional to help you if you don't have the time or patience to work on it yourself. I do my own labels because I enjoy the process and it's not a commercial thing, just for fun. Once it's commercial, there are many more considerations like the legal use of pictures, fonts etc and also how attractive it looks on the shelf.
salsalady
Business Member
It should have some kind of sauce description. Is the name The Little Bohemian's Hot Sauce or is the name The Little Bohemians and the product is hot sauce?
Thinking for down the road, set yourself up for options. If the name is...TLB Hot Sauce, what happens if you want you make chutney or pickles or salad dressing? Hot Sauce is in the name and logo. Kinda sounds funny if it is TLB Hot Sauce Salad Dressing.
If the name and logo is TLB, then you can make...
Chipotle Hot Sauce
Stawberry-habanero hot sauce
Serrano Cilantro hot sauce
Tahini salad dressing
Scorpion pickles
All under your TLB name.
You get the idea.
SL
Thinking for down the road, set yourself up for options. If the name is...TLB Hot Sauce, what happens if you want you make chutney or pickles or salad dressing? Hot Sauce is in the name and logo. Kinda sounds funny if it is TLB Hot Sauce Salad Dressing.
If the name and logo is TLB, then you can make...
Chipotle Hot Sauce
Stawberry-habanero hot sauce
Serrano Cilantro hot sauce
Tahini salad dressing
Scorpion pickles
All under your TLB name.
You get the idea.
SL