My First Novel, Tanya's Predicaments is available for sale

[dragon49]

I'm writing to shamelessly promote my first novel,

It is available as a kindle book, which can be read on a kindle, or any tablet or smartphone with a kindle app, or on a pc or mac with a free kindle reader, here:

http://www.amazon.com/Tanyas-Predicaments-ebook/dp/B008Z3XITY/


It is available as a nook book which can be read on a nook, or a pc or a mac with a free nook reader here:

http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/tanyas-predicaments-mark-penkower/1112526295?ean=2940014896276


It is available as an apple iBook, which can be read withing the iBooks app on an iPad or iPhone, here:

http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/tanyas-predicaments-mark-penkower/1112526295?ean=2940014896276


You can also purchase a pdf version here:

https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/215661


It is the equivalent of 91 printed pages and a good buy at $2.99.

 

[nate6279]

I must ask if thats you on the cover? Mark I mean. LOL. I'll have my wife check it out. She's the reader.

 

[thegreenman]

what's the genre?

 

[dragon49]

The Genre was hard for me to define. Fiction - Action Adventure - Hacking - Spy Novel

Oh, there is some adult content. It is not porn or erotica, but there are some words and situations.

 

[GreenTea]

Description
Tanya was a tall, fit blond. She looked good and carried herself well. She was fit and could handle herself. Tanya was a world-class mathematician and an excellent problem solver. How she had come to her current position was still a bit of a mystery. She had once wished for a simple existence, but her interests bred complexity. Follow the whirlwind and see how she handles her predicaments.



Good job on writing a novel! Congrats!

But I gotta say, as a critic, your description really sucks. Tells nothing about the story, and is written like a 7th grade English Lit essay.

I'd really consider rewriting the description unless you want people to think the whole novel is written as poorly.

 

[dragon49]

I didn't work too hard on the description as by the time I needed one, I was tired of writing and editing. I found it hard to write without giving away spoilers. I slightly revised it for the online retailers. It now reads:

Tanya is a tall, fit blond. She looks good and handles herself well. She is also a world-class mathematician and an excellent problem solver. How she came to her current position is still a bit of a mystery. She had once wished for a simple existence, but her interests breed complexity. Follow the international whirlwind and see how she deals with her predicaments.

GreenTea,

I'm interested in an opinion form somebody who does not natively speak English. Buy a copy and let me know what you think.