misc Post Card Critique

[Gemini Crow Sauce Company]

Ugh....Gotta order these by Monday morning...
Hopefully, you guys are up for some critiquing, ..
 
not looking for design aspect, more from a consumer angle if possible...
is the content of the card sufficient? any info i should be including that is not there?
 
i got a designer with me and open ears!
 

 

[Gemini Crow Sauce Company]

more typo or at least note to check-
hell-fire or hellfire
 
...as the bj peppers WREAK havoc -or- bj pepper WREAKS havoc...
 
 
still seeing" chile head"   not chilehead

 
edits being made

 

[Gemini Crow Sauce Company]

 
 
off to bed, and to print in the AM....
gonna do a smaller run first time around....
 
thank you for all the 'eyes'.

 

[Lucky Dog Hot Sauce]

I'm on my tiny phone - can't give a good critique -I'll leave it to capable hands of The Corrector!


Re: QR codes, I was thinking one for each but either way is ok. Steering them to each product page saves clicks. But either way is fine really.
Ps - edit it tomorrow AM - your brain will no longer be in creative mode & you'll catch errors you wouldn't see tonight.

 

[Gemini Crow Sauce Company]

I tested the coee on ym computer screen as well as a print out and it worked fine.....
 
I'm pooped....
 
2 concerts (Veruca Salt &  Kiss/Def Leppard), 3 markets, and babysitting my two kids and my niece and nephew over the last 4 days.....I'm pretty much dead to the world right now)..
 
night people.

 

[Hellraising Hot Sauce]

Quick typo: On "The Devil His Due" it should be morphs, not morph. 

 

[Gemini Crow Sauce Company]

Off to press....Any edits will have to come after i go through this run...Thanks again peeps.
 
 

 

[Gemini Crow Sauce Company]

Thank you everyone. Your edits, critiques, and advice paid off!
 
Won 3rd place in promotional marketing category of the 2015 Scovie Awards!  Got my call this afternoon!! When I saw the New Mexico number on my phone, I nearly pushed my 4 year old off the couch!